I have no criticism, this is a very solid and soothing piece.
Ups and Downs
On the whole this song is pretty good, I like the unique sound you've got going on there. Not a fan of the vocals though, I think a stronger singer could improve this song alot. Also it ends a bit abruptly.
Aside from that it's pretty good. Keep submitting and keep improving!
Try working on getting the beat to sound smoother. It didn't really flow and distracted me from the overall piece. Loving the funky guitar. Liked the melody that came into play at random intervals of the song. In my opinion it would've sounded better with a more defined bassline as well.
thx, i gonna check it. good advises.
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