I have no criticism, this is a very solid and soothing piece.
Ups and Downs
On the whole this song is pretty good, I like the unique sound you've got going on there. Not a fan of the vocals though, I think a stronger singer could improve this song alot. Also it ends a bit abruptly.
Aside from that it's pretty good. Keep submitting and keep improving!
Try working on getting the beat to sound smoother. It didn't really flow and distracted me from the overall piece. Loving the funky guitar. Liked the melody that came into play at random intervals of the song. In my opinion it would've sounded better with a more defined bassline as well.
thx, i gonna check it. good advises.
Overall it got a bit boring, nice melody though, and you can definately do more with it. Keep working on this one!
Can definately see this working as a background song for the car tuning. My only gripe with it is that it gets a little repetetive, which could be a problem if players are spending much time tuning the car.
Aside from that, good work.
I plan on adding a lot of songs to keep it from getting repetitive
So far so good
With more work, this could be a truly great track. I'm especially loving the choirs and the transition from the pluck to the piano around 1:20. It could also do with a more defined bassline(if it was there to begin with, I'm not sure) and a short melody to seal things up.
Great work so far!
hmmm... good suggestion, i like what you're thinking... well i'll see what i can do, and thanks tons for the review =D
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